Here we go Noah!
I like the compo.
A bit off; an unconventional point of view that highlights the dynamics of the scene: Well executed! The boy on the left is what my eyes landed on first but then his head and left hand directed me to the girl. Can the boy hear any of what is happening?? Mom as well as bystanders on the far left confirm that she is the main subject! Even the boy's tie seems to point to the little girl! So what's with the little girl? Well, she is tiny but her little lace outfit is just precious! Her defiant facial expression also is fantastic! Last, the shadow of mother/daughter add drama in the form of contrast to the image. Well done!!!
Last but not least, that film grain is simply beautiful!