Here is just my opinion and response to your image. Please, take it as such!
I like to colors here! (Fuji Classic Chrome?). The image is well exposed and the lady on the left is in perfect focus!
That said, I don't really like the composition. You cut the lady's hand on the left as well as the lady on the right. Not sure what to look at here. I feel like the main subject is on the left but she's really wedged to the edge of the frame. Also, the photo is titled and I am not sure it adds anything.
To me, this photo appears to be a snapshot taken in a hurry (hip shot?) with little thought given to composition or content. It fails to elicit much of an emotional response for me.
I do think that the lady on the left is photographically interesting but this image fails to achieve much from me.
I hope this helps.